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Schemilix
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PostSubject: SPAH IN BLUE BASE.   SPAH IN BLUE BASE. Icon_minitimeSat Jul 03, 2010 10:30 am

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crap it's huge. Anyway... I was doodling and it bore a faint resemblance to a younger spy... with... a luscious head of curly hair. Derp.

ANYWAY I thought it'd be relevant to your interests.

(Link) Here it is in dA and crap. Ta da.

Enjoy.
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PostSubject: Re: SPAH IN BLUE BASE.   SPAH IN BLUE BASE. Icon_minitimeSat Jul 03, 2010 10:42 am

How is that a spy? Its just some guy.
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PostSubject: Re: SPAH IN BLUE BASE.   SPAH IN BLUE BASE. Icon_minitimeSat Jul 03, 2010 10:45 am

By 'accident' I mean... an accident. Ergo, the resemblance is not exact. It was just uncanny considering it was a mistake.

Anyway you're an idiot trying to get on everyone's nerves these days, so I'm not inclined to listen.

If anybody else has qualms with his resemblance to the spy, I'll concede, by the way, it's not like I'm amazing. :^D
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PostSubject: Re: SPAH IN BLUE BASE.   SPAH IN BLUE BASE. Icon_minitimeSat Jul 03, 2010 11:11 am

What resemblance? The Spy doesn't even have a face <<<<<<<<<<<<<<_>
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PostSubject: Re: SPAH IN BLUE BASE.   SPAH IN BLUE BASE. Icon_minitimeSat Jul 03, 2010 11:27 am

Alright sweetie. :^)
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PostSubject: Re: SPAH IN BLUE BASE.   SPAH IN BLUE BASE. Icon_minitimeSat Jul 03, 2010 8:39 pm

I like it a lot. It's got a cool style and the anatomy is spot on. Did you have a reference or was it totally out of your head? Nice job.
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PostSubject: Re: SPAH IN BLUE BASE.   SPAH IN BLUE BASE. Icon_minitimeSun Jul 04, 2010 5:41 am

-JKR- wrote:
I like it a lot. It's got a cool style and the anatomy is spot on. Did you have a reference or was it totally out of your head? Nice job.

Thanks for the compliment on the style, dude. P: Means a lot.

As for reference, I'm surprised the anatomy's spot on. But nah, it was just a freehand doodle from my head... I did it straight to pen so I cleaned up the mess around the nose when I scanned. (link)

Is there anything you'd change, though, if it;s not too much to ask?
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PostSubject: Re: SPAH IN BLUE BASE.   SPAH IN BLUE BASE. Icon_minitimeSun Jul 04, 2010 8:03 am

I dunno, I mean, it really is well done. The style is loose, so saying "Clean it up" doesn't make sense since it's supposed to look that way. The one thing that kind of seems odd is that there's heavy shadow on the eye, but not a lot elsewhere. Why not add shadow to the rest of the face and clothes? And especially the neck. It would give it that extra bit of completion.

The other suggestion I suppose would be to give it a bit of a background. The left side is cropped so closely to the frame it makes for an unwanted tangent, and it's a simple fix to alter. Add in some more canvass space there and maybe a bit of interest behind the figure (light shadow? some scene?) and I think it will come together perfectly.
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PostSubject: Re: SPAH IN BLUE BASE.   SPAH IN BLUE BASE. Icon_minitimeSun Jul 04, 2010 8:07 am

Haha, yes. This is positively clean for my usual way of drawing, especially the face with... no stray lines at all, which is rare for me.

As for the shadow. Yeah, I agree in a way. I decided against it for simplicity - the shadw just brought focus to the eyes which I do often (if you look at the sketch, I always shade the brow-shadow and the under-eye even in lines), because I like eyes. I think it could benefit from a little neck shadow, though, so I agree there. I just stuck with flat because of the aforementioned clean-than-usual lines, since it kept focus on them without being as bland as it /could/ be.

Background... yes... I am notorious for not doing backgrounds. D:
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